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My Image of Perfection by ~Torla:iconTorla:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed




How you hold me tight
And snug me close
You're my image of perfection.

With your soft blue eyes
And your button nose
You're my image of perfection

With your dark brokwn hair
And kissable lips
You're my image of perfection

With your wonderous smile
And your tickle fits
You're my image of perfection

With your comforting words
And affectionate moods
You're my image of perfection

With your heated temper
And how you brood
You're my image of perfection

With good and bad
And inbetween too
You're my image of perfection

With ups and downs
And everyhing about you
You're my image of perfection.
©2005-2009 ~Torla
:icontorla:

Author's Comments

REALL REALLY old poem that I found..... about an old love. but I thought I owed it to you all to submit it.

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~Michellestarz Jul 2, 2005, 12:12:47 PM
I remember this poem!

I still think its cute...

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(¸.·´ (¸.·' I like your lips wet with wine and red with wicked desire
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~Torla Jul 2, 2005, 3:23:20 PM
I think it's naive.

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Destroy something beautiful. It's the only thing worth destroying.
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~animebbw Jul 3, 2005, 12:36:32 PM
Don't know if I'd call it "naive"... it's how I feel about my husband...
:icontorla:
~Torla Jul 3, 2005, 4:42:18 PM
Ah but see, the boy I love broke up with me for another girl...

--
Destroy something beautiful. It's the only thing worth destroying.
:iconanimebbw:
~animebbw Jul 3, 2005, 6:01:00 PM
Well, that I can definitely understand... and I can see why it would seem "naive".

I'm sorry to hear about that.... It's never easy to get past that pain.
:icontorla:
~Torla Jul 3, 2005, 7:09:13 PM
I don't know yet.... I'm still going through it. But i'll find out how long this will last. All in time.

The humorus thing is...she's my best friend. hahaha

--
Destroy something beautiful. It's the only thing worth destroying.
:iconanimebbw:
~animebbw Jul 4, 2005, 4:33:07 PM
Heh Oh, sweet irony.... I've been there. :) Well, as cliche and superficial it may sound, good luck with it.... I remember I needed all the luck I could get to get through it. :)
:icontorla:
~Torla Jul 4, 2005, 6:27:37 PM
thankyou much. I know I need all the luck I can get too.

--
Destroy something beautiful. It's the only thing worth destroying.
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